Please be careful when you read these. They are not written by teachers or experts. These are partially corrected student essays. The words in parenthesis ( ) represent the correction. Not everything has been corrected, and there could still be mistakes in them.
是修改过学生好写作,修改过的地方是在括号内。 文章上还有显明的错误. 写得很简单。 是入门写作。 但初学者不会注意到错误在那里。所以拿来自学会被误导。
For a list of good and bad sample essays, go to Section 4 of
http://www3.sympatico.ca/d.stephen/articles.htm 4. (I)好坏范文 .
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